Hey @thehammer,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'What Now', here are our thoughts 💥
Love the natural sounding flow here. "I got one brother when i was broke he helped me, when I was sad he cared for me..." - definitely seems like you got a special relationship with your bro!
Good choice of beat here! 🎼 We love the breakdown section on this, with those background vocal samples! Also those pianos are so clean! Love what you do with it too!
We'd love to see you add some effects like a tiny bit of reverb to the vocal to help it sound even more natural and fit even more to the vibe of the beat!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @thehammer, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'What Now', here are our thoughts 💥 Love the natural sounding flow here. "I got one brother when i was broke he helped me, when I was sad he cared for me..." - definitely seems like you got a special relationship with your bro! Good choice of beat here! 🎼 We love the breakdown section on this, with those background vocal samples! Also those pianos are so clean! Love what you do with it too! We'd love to see you add some effects like a tiny bit of reverb to the vocal to help it sound even more natural and fit even more to the vibe of the beat! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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