Hey @timosway,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'mellow'! 💥
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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listen to this shit.. #freestyle #streets #rapfame #mellow #Sway #Lagos
great track nicely done keep making those bangers 💯
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Hey @timosway, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'mellow'! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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