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Yo @youngforever.7460296, It's time for us to take a look at '757 Records _LLC - moon 2022-07-27 23_23'! π₯ Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. π We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You really showed your emotions on this, we respect the hell out of that. π Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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