U Can't FWM
I'm just Chillin in the Shade with my shades on/ the nights seem short but the days long// don't even need a beam cuz my aims on/ u can say I'm way up but I'm way gone// Puerto rican model with a pretty face/ She down for the team like we own the yankees// runts in the blunt still smelling great/ but my heart getting Cold like the great lakes// Enemies can get it by any means/ if u want beef you can get it with double cheese// The time that they given Will quake you down to your knees/ if u ain't about that life then shut the fuck up and leave yo// Never love these hoes still MOB/ I'm balling out in Cali Sacramento kings// Smoking L's to the face just to stay awake/ feeling great like we just made a triple play// too many times riding in a lamborghini/ Believe me the greatest telescope can't see me// we 3 deep wishing without a genie/ God's on my side so ain't no need for the demons//
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I'm just Chillin in the Shade with my shades on/ the nights seem short but the days long// don't even need a beam cuz my aims on/ u can say I'm way up but I'm way gone// Puerto rican model with a pretty face/ She down for the team like we own the yankees// runts in the blunt still smelling great/ but my heart getting Cold like the great lakes// Enemies can get it by any means/ if u want beef you can get it with double cheese// The time that they given Will quake you down to your knees/ if u ain't about that life then shut the fuck up and leave yo// Never love these hoes still MOB/ I'm balling out in Cali Sacramento kings// Smoking L's to the face just to stay awake/ feeling great like we just made a triple play// too many times riding in a lamborghini/ Believe me the greatest telescope can't see me// we 3 deep wishing without a genie/ God's on my side so ain't no need for the demons//
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