Wassup @snave,
Thank you for sharing 'EVANS - PALM TREES' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Good choice of beat! πΌ
The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @snave, Thank you for sharing 'EVANS - PALM TREES' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat! πΌ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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