Hey @tjdavis.7048649,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Tony Davis - slip away 2022-05-07 10_29'! ๐ฅ
Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean.
You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! ๐
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
CTV ENT PHISTXZ PRODUCTION OWNER JAMES CYRUS CYRUSTHAVIRUZ ENTERTAINMENT Artist Houston
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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thanks to the fans and to the haters
this different keep at it ๐ช๐ช๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Hey @tjdavis.7048649, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Tony Davis - slip away 2022-05-07 10_29'! ๐ฅ Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Great ๐
gs bro keep it up! I feel like a bit less auto tune would help out this track bit everything else is ๐ฅ
Iโm sorry but I donโt like your song Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
Ay man in my opinion I think you should turn down or just turn off the autotune.
keep grinding๐ฏโฝ๐ฏโฝ Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
CTV ENT PHISTXZ PRODUCTION OWNER JAMES CYRUS CYRUSTHAVIRUZ ENTERTAINMENT Artist Houston Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
different Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Good ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
ok
๐ค Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Great ๐