Hey @6yoru44ouj!
Thanks for sharing 'I ' with us! π₯
Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
The background doesn't bring much to this video to make it stand out, try a different concept. You've really nailed the lighting here, nice job!
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @6yoru44ouj! Thanks for sharing 'I ' with us! π₯ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. The background doesn't bring much to this video to make it stand out, try a different concept. You've really nailed the lighting here, nice job! Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
You need to import the beat and record your vocals separately.
voice should be improved Bars: Can improve π Delivery: Can improve π Impression: Can improve π