Yo @theofficialreddys,
It's time for us to take a look at 'so far away'! ๐ฅ
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. ๐
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. ๐
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
hey there bro amazing song bro sick flow cruddy flow with the song and the music is awesome and the song ๐ต ๐ถ is fire ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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vibes ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ซก Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @theofficialreddys, It's time for us to take a look at 'so far away'! ๐ฅ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. ๐ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. ๐ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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hey there bro amazing song bro sick flow cruddy flow with the song and the music is awesome and the song ๐ต ๐ถ is fire ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Nice, chill vibe to thisโฆ. keep at it ๐๐ผ๐ฏ
Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐