I got new battles please comment #TmYourLessPotent is one of them ๐ฏ much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance ๐ ๐ฏ hope you enjoy what u hear ๐ ๐
What's up @jorelwilliams,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'lunch break freestyle '! ๐ฅ
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
Loving the laid back vibe here! ๐
Practice where you are going to breath in between verses to stay on the beat.
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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I got new battles please comment #TmYourLessPotent is one of them ๐ฏ much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance ๐ ๐ฏ hope you enjoy what u hear ๐ ๐
What's up @jorelwilliams, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'lunch break freestyle '! ๐ฅ The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Loving the laid back vibe here! ๐ Practice where you are going to breath in between verses to stay on the beat. It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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