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What's up @jorelwilliams,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'lunch break freestyle '! 💥
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
Loving the laid back vibe here! 🌊
Practice where you are going to breath in between verses to stay on the beat.
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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I got new battles please comment #TmYourLessPotent is one of them 💯 much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 hope you enjoy what u hear 🏆 👌
What's up @jorelwilliams, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'lunch break freestyle '! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Loving the laid back vibe here! 🌊 Practice where you are going to breath in between verses to stay on the beat. It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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