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One day you might realize why i did the shit i did One day we can link again snd i can fuvk you like a bitch One day you should let it go but if not i dont give a fuck i ainr even know that was yo cousin when i bust that nut keep it real keep it real imma fwu foreva Saying no names but together we pressure last time u was over left a bag in the dresser i took all your percs and a half a xan to get a level im on my level lion hearted hard as metal
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One day you might realize why i did the shit i did One day we can link again snd i can fuvk you like a bitch One day you should let it go but if not i dont give a fuck i ainr even know that was yo cousin when i bust that nut keep it real keep it real imma fwu foreva Saying no names but together we pressure last time u was over left a bag in the dresser i took all your percs and a half a xan to get a level im on my level lion hearted hard as metal
Hey @brandonhebert.7353681, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'one day', here are our thoughts π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ This beat is working well for you! πΌ The track is well recorded and sounds clean and crisp, good job on that. Kinda hard to make out what you saying on here fam! Definitely respect the flow you got going tho! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @brandonhebert.7353681! Here's a couple tips for your track 'one day'! π₯ 1. This was a good start! Feel like once you get a decent amount of practice in you'll be droppin' bangers left and right! 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! π 3. With effects, less can sometimes be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 4. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! Send your track to Hot for some feedback from us, we'd love to hear your tracks! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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