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Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! π
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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you need to work on your vocal mixes but otherwise it's fucking sweet
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Yo @lilbje, It's time for us to take a look at 'Turn upp'! π₯ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat here! πΌ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! π Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
litty keep going sounds like a lot of talent!!
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