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Hey @ryanduke,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Hala show'! π₯
You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback!
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Gotta clear the vocals up a lil bit next time. Sometimes all it take is a lil reverb!
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
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so this is a dope beat, and your style pulls everything together really nicely, I would like to add that taking the extra time to copy and paste your lyrics in your description can help us see your work on paper and show us the full extent of your talent it really hits different on paper, other than that this is a great track and I think you have a lot of potential, nicely done RESPECT π₯π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π―π―π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Hey @ryanduke, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Hala show'! π₯ You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Your bars are good, keep it up! π The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Gotta clear the vocals up a lil bit next time. Sometimes all it take is a lil reverb! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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