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Hey @obwan,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Being real '! π₯
Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
Try improving your recording quality if you can. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them.
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! π
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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God lee. Quality work all the way around. Definitely gonna be waitinf on the new one.
Fire as Fuck! Beat is hard too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I fuck with your flow you should join my crew check me out go from there
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Hey @obwan, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Being real '! π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ Try improving your recording quality if you can. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! π A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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