What's up @depression_yt,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Luvely'! π₯
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Your timing is great, nicely done. π
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
Try improving your recording quality if you can. Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged!
Seriously deep content! Respect for showing your heart!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @depression_yt, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Luvely'! π₯ The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Your timing is great, nicely done. π It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Try improving your recording quality if you can. Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged! Seriously deep content! Respect for showing your heart! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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