What's up @depression_yt,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Luvely'! ๐ฅ
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Your timing is great, nicely done. ๐
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
Try improving your recording quality if you can. Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged!
Seriously deep content! Respect for showing your heart!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! ๐ค
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Peux tu mieux faire Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Good ๐
Let me get on a remix ๐ฅ this song is almost finished! Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
What's up @depression_yt, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Luvely'! ๐ฅ The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Your timing is great, nicely done. ๐ It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Try improving your recording quality if you can. Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged! Seriously deep content! Respect for showing your heart! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! ๐ค We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
CHECC MY SHIT OUT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE ๐ฏ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐ถ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Like it nice flow on point Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Its ai Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Boi u sound like juice ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
fire track Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฏ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
depression I like good job Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Cold โ๏ธ Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ