Bye?

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Bye?

Not my track. But these are my lyrics. First time song writing and "rapping". Know I don't have the right voice but putting myself out there. Open to tips. #rap #firsttry #beats

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4 years ago

Not my track. But these are my lyrics. First time song writing and "rapping". Know I don't have the right voice but putting myself out there. Open to tips. #rap #firsttry #beats

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4 years ago

πŸ”₯ πŸ₯΅ keep bringing that energy fam

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4 years ago

Hi @portiaros3! Welcome to our feedback of 'Bye?'! πŸ’₯ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. πŸ‘ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎢 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! πŸ™ This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

this is really fire Portia. I hear the Australian accent. it's definitely a good listen. Stay focused on your music

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

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Bars: Great πŸŽ‰ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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4 years ago

Haha love your track cover!! And your flow is very nice too! Keep up good work πŸ‘

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

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4 years ago

Nice beat and nice bars Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

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keep grinding Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

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4 years ago

good shit ma Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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Yooooooooooo Nice vibes Decent sound Keep going

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