my time
(what more kan i say what more kan i do what more kan i tell u to get through to u the only thing i need to tell u fgk9 is tha movement and thats tha truth what more kan i say) i showed the world what my talents is thats tha truth now im about to balance it pull out a paper and pen and take notes cause what im about to tell u about this music industry is no joke if u dont got the funds to support ur talent they consider u a joke they take money from artist that got talent but not in the music industry and make hits out if wack shit so i gotta bring my skillz through a whole other entrance and debo the music exec like a legendary mob figga to all my brother and sister in the game with all this money and wealth it's time to get from under the thumb of the music industry politics and create or own big cooperate company that house big mainstream artist take it back to Motown early days forreal with the raw and undiscovered talent thats around but how would you know if u dont give them s chance to show case they talent get they shine on kause to they worried about music politics so watered down they wouldn't know what real music is even if they got slapped in the face with it (on sum real shit thats how it is in this music bring back that raw and uncut shit back in tha 80s 90s shit to all my ogs i thank ya for this ya prepared a nigga to bring that gud shit back to lite lil baby gave me the green light to do what i do so im do what i have to i got the world behind a brother so ima open avenues and gates ways so all of us kould be straight thats real
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(what more kan i say what more kan i do what more kan i tell u to get through to u the only thing i need to tell u fgk9 is tha movement and thats tha truth what more kan i say) i showed the world what my talents is thats tha truth now im about to balance it pull out a paper and pen and take notes cause what im about to tell u about this music industry is no joke if u dont got the funds to support ur talent they consider u a joke they take money from artist that got talent but not in the music industry and make hits out if wack shit so i gotta bring my skillz through a whole other entrance and debo the music exec like a legendary mob figga to all my brother and sister in the game with all this money and wealth it's time to get from under the thumb of the music industry politics and create or own big cooperate company that house big mainstream artist take it back to Motown early days forreal with the raw and undiscovered talent thats around but how would you know if u dont give them s chance to show case they talent get they shine on kause to they worried about music politics so watered down they wouldn't know what real music is even if they got slapped in the face with it (on sum real shit thats how it is in this music bring back that raw and uncut shit back in tha 80s 90s shit to all my ogs i thank ya for this ya prepared a nigga to bring that gud shit back to lite lil baby gave me the green light to do what i do so im do what i have to i got the world behind a brother so ima open avenues and gates ways so all of us kould be straight thats real
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Hey @smyer, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'my time', here are our thoughts π₯ There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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