Hi there @74021767,
Here's some feedback on your track 'im savage', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ
There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear.
Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. ๐ค
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Love the composition of the track. Excellent sound quality. Keep grinding your craft Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Nice Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
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๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
๐ฅ๐ฏ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hi there @74021767, Here's some feedback on your track 'im savage', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. ๐ค All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Banger Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
this dope just work on yo bars Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Nice ๐
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I wan hear more from you keep working bro โ ๐คง๐ฅ
HEAT ๐ฅต You UP ๐ Strong Bars ๐ช Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ