Yng_Damo-_Real_Ones_live_on
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β’02 Jun 2022
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Hey @yng23damo, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Yng_Damo-_Real_Ones_live_on'! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
I woulda judged the rest but no time to waste . Keep goin boaa Bars: Can improve π Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Can improve π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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