respetos y saludos compadre estoy listo con el jale con hielo para ke aguanten el desmadre chelas frias como las lineas ke compongo el chacho salta como rana pues yo le disparo ,estoy muy gordo para el salto cuando la pistola disponible a mi lado mi palabra no se kiebra ensendiendo lumbres para fumar desta yerba nino y jackojaxsta doze costaleando mas cabrones ke la lucha libre .y ensendiendo microphonos y aciendo abujeros de 50 calibre mis respetos carnal cuando usted guste collab en un track cuente con migo ,Al rato .Jax
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I I may not speak your language but I could definitely tell you came and crafty with your lyrics very good delivery an awesome energy I feel like your concept was on point I hope to see you support my music brother
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Hi @ninosworld809!
Welcome to our feedback of 'CASANDO_PUERKITOS'! 💥
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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respetos y saludos compadre estoy listo con el jale con hielo para ke aguanten el desmadre chelas frias como las lineas ke compongo el chacho salta como rana pues yo le disparo ,estoy muy gordo para el salto cuando la pistola disponible a mi lado mi palabra no se kiebra ensendiendo lumbres para fumar desta yerba nino y jackojaxsta doze costaleando mas cabrones ke la lucha libre .y ensendiendo microphonos y aciendo abujeros de 50 calibre mis respetos carnal cuando usted guste collab en un track cuente con migo ,Al rato .Jax Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
I I may not speak your language but I could definitely tell you came and crafty with your lyrics very good delivery an awesome energy I feel like your concept was on point I hope to see you support my music brother Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Hi @ninosworld809! Welcome to our feedback of 'CASANDO_PUERKITOS'! 💥 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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