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Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Unforgiven secrets-Rich Pablo '! π₯
We like the bars, well written! We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
The vocals sound good, little too loud but still crisp and clear. Maybe work on your delivery a bit and you in there!
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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good work with the word play Unforgiven Secrets was very creative I definitely love the way you came hard on this project and I hope to see you support my music
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Yo @pablodacookiemonster! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Unforgiven secrets-Rich Pablo '! π₯ We like the bars, well written! We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ The vocals sound good, little too loud but still crisp and clear. Maybe work on your delivery a bit and you in there! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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