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Hey @chn9ixnmst,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Ontopit', here are our thoughts 💥
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @chn9ixnmst, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Ontopit', here are our thoughts 💥 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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