Dear Alcohol
Dear Alcohol I've been drinking since the age of thirteen but now I'm at the age of eighteen so I am legal and will always be clean people must stop being mean because drinking is in my genes It is not easy to stay sober while you smell like someone with a bad oder I can't even afford a TV and a decoder people today who drink just want some closure and the devil is lurking closer so your time with the lord is over people drink because they are depressed my mind feels like someone possessed I need help from the lord so I must confess and release a lot of stress I drink glasses of juice and gin and that's the reason why I sin and I ball like Jeremy Lin while I play soccer in Belgium one bottle can take your life away while people can easily become gay So what are your plans for the day or must I bow down and pray or hit a nice fade away I feel wasted and drinking is overrated so I tell alcohol I see you later after my shifts of being a waiter , my boss is a huge hater because he can't go to the theater Drinking will never give you happiness but you can become someone's mistress Most people today own a business but can't ask the lord for forgiveness Thus drug causes a lot of violence because people can't stay silent so we must go on a diet or become a trained pilot I feel lost and not myself Alcohol took my health and my wealth I'm drunk and count in twelves so why am I still alive if alcohol will not let me survive I am drinking at the age of twenty and alcohol is very trendy but also very deadly I'm living a life which is heavenly Drinking can break a relationship , people can't even pay you a tip because alcohol is near your lips , your life will have many dips so stop taking sips , rather take ownership I'm drinking at the age of eighty with no actual safety and my life has been shady , Alcohol took my wife and my baby my body feel achy You must live life daily because you don't know when your death may be It's Big T
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Dear Alcohol I've been drinking since the age of thirteen but now I'm at the age of eighteen so I am legal and will always be clean people must stop being mean because drinking is in my genes It is not easy to stay sober while you smell like someone with a bad oder I can't even afford a TV and a decoder people today who drink just want some closure and the devil is lurking closer so your time with the lord is over people drink because they are depressed my mind feels like someone possessed I need help from the lord so I must confess and release a lot of stress I drink glasses of juice and gin and that's the reason why I sin and I ball like Jeremy Lin while I play soccer in Belgium one bottle can take your life away while people can easily become gay So what are your plans for the day or must I bow down and pray or hit a nice fade away I feel wasted and drinking is overrated so I tell alcohol I see you later after my shifts of being a waiter , my boss is a huge hater because he can't go to the theater Drinking will never give you happiness but you can become someone's mistress Most people today own a business but can't ask the lord for forgiveness Thus drug causes a lot of violence because people can't stay silent so we must go on a diet or become a trained pilot I feel lost and not myself Alcohol took my health and my wealth I'm drunk and count in twelves so why am I still alive if alcohol will not let me survive I am drinking at the age of twenty and alcohol is very trendy but also very deadly I'm living a life which is heavenly Drinking can break a relationship , people can't even pay you a tip because alcohol is near your lips , your life will have many dips so stop taking sips , rather take ownership I'm drinking at the age of eighty with no actual safety and my life has been shady , Alcohol took my wife and my baby my body feel achy You must live life daily because you don't know when your death may be It's Big T
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