Yo @burgerbuddies69!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Loose rhymes'! π₯
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π
The flows are clean and considered on this one! We fully rate it! π
You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
Top beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Using headphones next time would defo help improve the quality! π§
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @burgerbuddies69! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Loose rhymes'! π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π The flows are clean and considered on this one! We fully rate it! π You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Top beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ Try improving your recording quality if you can. Using headphones next time would defo help improve the quality! π§ Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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