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Hi @lawrencefane! Welcome to our feedback of 'selfish '! π₯ Some real woke and introspective bars on this tune! We can tell you got a real creative mind! π§ We like the rhymes in here as well, good job.β¨ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. This would level up your song a ton! β¬οΈ We're defo feeling the chill on this one through the way you flow. π We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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