Hi @jaybake!
Welcome to our feedback of 'One Chance'! π₯
We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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This is sooooooo nice
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Hi @jaybake! Welcome to our feedback of 'One Chance'! π₯ We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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