What my Mummy said pt1
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•15 May 2022
I'm just a young boy from the suburb Looking for young girls to show me some love But they treating me like i got the leprosy They avoing me Maybe cause of my nails Or grown hairs Oh shit i even had that shit trimmed in like 4 years The wolf man is me Mamma doesn't care for us Pappa doesn't know of us Never owned a pair of sucks Put together that shit sucks This is us. it's our life What you expect from us Grow to be lawyers and be doctors You were fucking nuts Come on man just look at us Tell me if you're proud enough Sammy just murdered a cop Now he's always on run Just like lenny said Let tell your sorry ass What my mummy said Before she left us with another man sit your asses there Look in my eyes I see you're a parasite Just like your dumb dad But he is out of sight
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Yo @kiddolaw! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'What my Mummy said pt1'! 💥 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try adding some vocal effects like autotune & reverb to really help your vocals shine through! ✨ Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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