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Wassup @geraldthethird, Thank you for sharing 'phillthie mess-rude boy ' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: We like the bars, well written! Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Nice timing! Never left the beat once! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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