Hey @dorcelamrone,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Dorcela mr one : maki ina zidi (officiel audio) T2K'! 💥
Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠
This beat choice is great for you! 🎼
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @dorcelamrone, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Dorcela mr one : maki ina zidi (officiel audio) T2K'! 💥 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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