Hey @coryrobertson.7126970,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on '2 way mirror by unknown369 OffTop_mixed'! π₯
Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat.
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π
You got some real unique flows on this one, helps you stand out - hella distinctive! βοΈ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. π
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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2 way mirror by: Unknown369
dope music I feel like you did you thing great content keep pushing good flow nice creativity I hope see you support me in my battle h
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this good, I lost your vocals at times with the low tone. keep ya grind Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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keep working on that flow bro n lvl up them lyricsπ€ Bars: Can improve π Delivery: Nice π Impression: Can improve π
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Hey @coryrobertson.7126970, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on '2 way mirror by unknown369 OffTop_mixed'! π₯ Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π You got some real unique flows on this one, helps you stand out - hella distinctive! βοΈ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. π Great beat choice, really works with the track! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π