Bogus Whack Words
I pull guns on nuns but my clips filled with none// Shot one into my tongue now I spit bullets for funds// Hot spits come out hot quick slipping through my lips and my gums// Tripping on my dick and slipping on my spits// twisting like a cyclone// Tongue twisters come quicker than some liquor get your mind blown// Hydro and my tight flowing will get your blood inside going// I might blow it with my next line but these rhymes won't show it// These skills I'm Scheming from the demon inside my cerebrum// People in battles I beat em treat em like a bitch eating my semen// I See men dreaming screaming for a chance to be me when I beat em// I'm a lunatic who managed to cause punitive// Damage on a damn rampage wounded you but fixed it with a band-aid// Now ya'lls my damn slaves, my crayon breaks and my hand aches// I can't finish my song for damn sakes// Fuck it, I'll just wing it with blood from my pinky// And the mainframe of my brain// My styles are eccentric, demented, face fucked like I fell on some cement kid// I'm relentless, my skills are endless, this song may never be ending// I see all you fakes pretending// Pretending to be venting behind a pen and pencil when really you're repenting// To this Rap god in every sentence// Hopefully every sensory is present rather than deprived as a vengeance// With Visions of vehement demons viciously voracious// For tasteless wastes of spaces// Wasting paper chasing fame is kinda shameful but your shameless//
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I pull guns on nuns but my clips filled with none// Shot one into my tongue now I spit bullets for funds// Hot spits come out hot quick slipping through my lips and my gums// Tripping on my dick and slipping on my spits// twisting like a cyclone// Tongue twisters come quicker than some liquor get your mind blown// Hydro and my tight flowing will get your blood inside going// I might blow it with my next line but these rhymes won't show it// These skills I'm Scheming from the demon inside my cerebrum// People in battles I beat em treat em like a bitch eating my semen// I See men dreaming screaming for a chance to be me when I beat em// I'm a lunatic who managed to cause punitive// Damage on a damn rampage wounded you but fixed it with a band-aid// Now ya'lls my damn slaves, my crayon breaks and my hand aches// I can't finish my song for damn sakes// Fuck it, I'll just wing it with blood from my pinky// And the mainframe of my brain// My styles are eccentric, demented, face fucked like I fell on some cement kid// I'm relentless, my skills are endless, this song may never be ending// I see all you fakes pretending// Pretending to be venting behind a pen and pencil when really you're repenting// To this Rap god in every sentence// Hopefully every sensory is present rather than deprived as a vengeance// With Visions of vehement demons viciously voracious// For tasteless wastes of spaces// Wasting paper chasing fame is kinda shameful but your shameless//
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