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Hey @mrlamarrneal,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'My Goodbye Letter'! ๐ฅ
Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. ๐ง
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel.
Some super dope ideas here in terms of delivery, flow and melody, you just gotta clean up your track around the edges a little more so there are fewer technical issues distracting from the substance of the track.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @mrlamarrneal, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'My Goodbye Letter'! ๐ฅ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. ๐ง Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐ Great beat choice, really works with the track! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. Some super dope ideas here in terms of delivery, flow and melody, you just gotta clean up your track around the edges a little more so there are fewer technical issues distracting from the substance of the track. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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