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Your flow is laid back and effortless, but it's sounding a little loose at times and it sounds like you missed the beat a couple times. The rhyme schemes are dope too but the track generally just needs a bit more polish. Keep up that grind!
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Yo @yungscooba! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'action figure '! π₯ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You're perfectly on beat with this, awesome! π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ The vocals are nicely recorded, soundin' clean! To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! Your flow is laid back and effortless, but it's sounding a little loose at times and it sounds like you missed the beat a couple times. The rhyme schemes are dope too but the track generally just needs a bit more polish. Keep up that grind! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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