god's will

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esta vida es cruel duro apremdido pero me paro porke dios esta comigo comtinuo este camino porke ay mucho ke estan perdido y no kieren entender ke diablo es un enemigo ke te tapa los ojos y combiente lo feo alindo agradesido por mis yjas y mis yjo no puedo avandonalos como mi padre yso los tiempos estan cambiando y er cayejon esta frio tuve ke ponerme alomio me canta ver a mi madre sonteir aora veo loke asetiempo me kiso desir

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Eloy Rivera

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4 years ago

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JAHDAGGER D DON 💯💯

4 years ago

🔥🎶 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

LAZY SOUTHERN KING~THE ALPHA

4 years ago

💯💯 Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Can improve 👏

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @eloyrivera.8992, It's time for us to take a look at 'god's will'! 💥 Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Zamm

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

ChrisRobbers

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

9 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Adamiyat iman

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥