Better

Name: Better
Description: when you get left all alone and you know that it was all your fault!! this is how you beg her to take you back by promising to be BETTER!!!

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when you get left all alone and you know that it was all your fault!! this is how you beg her to take you back by promising to be BETTER!!!

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Jamahl Crayton

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4 years ago

when you get left all alone and you know that it was all your fault!! this is how you beg her to take you back by promising to be BETTER!!!

🎙EA$Y MONEY💰🙏

4 years ago

smooth vibe salute

Mario Moreno

4 years ago

I'm not sure what to say I like the bars but I feel like you didn't choose the right beat Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

WaynnDikky

4 years ago

This shit is hot boss

🥵RAPcHORDu🔥FLAMe🤒

4 years ago

🤯blow my mind foooking….🧠gone

👑 Melinated King👑

4 years ago

@mctahjamahl come stop by my new song. #UnthinkableRemix2

UNKNOWN

4 years ago

new out homie drop by#markg #marku

T.blaze 🎶🎙

4 years ago

Nice one fam peep #goat5

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @mctahjamahl, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Better '! 💥 Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. 👍 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! The recording quality is good overall, nicely done! ✔ This is a really interesting vibe you got going here! Giving us Rock vibes at points! 🤟 Love the breakdown where you're just speaking about the girl, in this section we hear your rap/speaking voice & its awesome! 🔥 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Karelian the Devil

4 years ago

goldii settii 💥👌 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Louchi

4 years ago

this right here that heat fr 🔥 luv this vibe on God

TMBeatZ

4 years ago

I got new battles please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to 🏆 👌 #TmGetARebuff #TmStopTheTalk hope you enjoy what u hear 👂

O.G. ONELEG💨🚬

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

adogg7730

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

ELLIOTT TODD

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Marckel🗽🎤🤴🏾♎️⚖️

5 months ago

WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥