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Hey @bigdaddylivewire! Thanks for sharing 'Lonely Heart' with us! 💥 Your bars are good, keep it up! 🙌 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Damn, even more impressive that this is a freestyle. You've got skills fr fr.🤩 You got some interesting flows on this one! We especially rating the verse, with the way you switch up the flow as the beat goes on! This in combination with your development of the rhyme scheme really works well! 💯 We think the delivery in the hook section could be improved to match the quality of the verses! Good choice of beat too! 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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