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Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Acapella'! π₯
Good bars here, defo works here! π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ
Would be dope if you spent some time slowing down to really let the words drag a bit.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @captain.6953250! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Acapella'! π₯ Good bars here, defo works here! π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Would be dope if you spent some time slowing down to really let the words drag a bit. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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