Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @DezalonPhillipMann, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Bitter sweet (Dez Deniro)'! 💥 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're perfectly on beat with this, awesome! 🌠 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. You ATE on this track! Absolute heat 🥵 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Michael Inniss

2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Jay Motixn

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥