Hey @melvinpimpnebojackson,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on '05. IT WONT BE ME'! π₯
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent.
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
Dope vocals on this fam! Real dope voice! Mix could be a lil bit cleaner but still hard!
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @melvinpimpnebojackson, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on '05. IT WONT BE ME'! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Dope vocals on this fam! Real dope voice! Mix could be a lil bit cleaner but still hard! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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