Depression

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Rappers go through depression Tryna find yourself is so stressing They talk about you Cause they jealous Buckle up, social media reckless Don’t care about yo feelings They selfish, They’ll leave you hanging Like a necklace, Gotta swallow yo pride to express this, I'm the mailman I got to address this, It’s the only way you’ll grow Like steph curry you gotta let it go, Can’t hold it in cause it’s gone show You C4, in minutes you’ll blow Like some pumas, Put it all on the track Take the beat, eat it up like a snack Don’t let them derail you, Stay on track Spaulding yeah dog, You’ll bounce back

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Daves WRLD

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4 years ago

JSwizz aka Punisher

4 years ago

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4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @daveswrld, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Depression '! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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4 years ago

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2 months ago

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Game Master

4 years ago

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