Falmouth House At Oceanview
this is about the care facility where my mom lives with alzheimers...a truly amazing place. we thank them for caring for her!
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Hey @evdaze, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Falmouth House At Oceanview'! ๐ฅ Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. We think that it's great you found your own sound and you have such a unique vibe about you! We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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