D Jan Jan man

Name: D Jan Jan man
Description: Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Dylan Janssen

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @dylanjanssen, Here's some feedback on your track 'D Jan Jan man', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Adding your own barz to your tracks real helps to show off your lyrical skill! To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dylan Janssen

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4 years ago

this was my dream since I was 16 years and I'm actually trying now

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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4 years ago