Hey @bigplanz,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'B2L-#Born2Lose (One take off the witts)'! 💥
The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one.
The rhyming is well put together. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍
Definitely see what you was doing here mane. Glad you was able to get the emotion out for this track. Would def try and work on the delivery and recording quality. That’s your next point of focus. Keep goin’!
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @bigplanz, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'B2L-#Born2Lose (One take off the witts)'! 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. The rhyming is well put together. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Definitely see what you was doing here mane. Glad you was able to get the emotion out for this track. Would def try and work on the delivery and recording quality. That’s your next point of focus. Keep goin’! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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