Yo @lrgking29,
It's time for us to take a look at 'what happened to that boy remix'! 💥
Your rhyming is tight. ✨
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. ✔
we definitely think the lyrical content could be a little more relatable and varied, however, there's a TON of impressive rhyme schemes and smooth, confident flows in here. Love the computery beat, perfect canvas for the relentless nature of your flow. The vocals are a little quiet and we'd love to hear you a little better, but these are just minor issues. The charisma and skill is here for sure, now time for a longer track!
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @lrgking29, It's time for us to take a look at 'what happened to that boy remix'! 💥 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. ✔ we definitely think the lyrical content could be a little more relatable and varied, however, there's a TON of impressive rhyme schemes and smooth, confident flows in here. Love the computery beat, perfect canvas for the relentless nature of your flow. The vocals are a little quiet and we'd love to hear you a little better, but these are just minor issues. The charisma and skill is here for sure, now time for a longer track! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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