Hey @lilgangsta.6972013,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Lil gangsta_-_stay suspicious ', here are our thoughts π₯
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work.
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @lilgangsta.6972013, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Lil gangsta_-_stay suspicious ', here are our thoughts π₯ This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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