Admission Ticket
Yo, thanks for listening however far you could make it in the track. Any critics and advice is more then welcome and appreciated both good and bad, this the third song I ever made. I appreciate y'all. #Knowmaddofficial #RapFame #Lyrical #HipHop Welcome to my demo imma rip this instrumental With the pen im presidential and im stacking some credentials My mental is my temple where i harness my potential When I ride the tempo im extra detrimental/ Very disrespectful quit talking out your rectal Send you to the spectral when i cut you like im Tenchu Carve you like a stencil wounds the could never be tend to Your death is essential i watch your spirit leave its vessel/ So i suggest you settle before your laying eternally restful You shouldnt have mettled but nows your time to be resentful And i'll be far from gentle when i feed you all the metal I'll rearrange your dentals you have every reason to tremble/ And youre grave is just a rental so you owe on the rent to Which is actually now due im not sorry to tell you Now off to meet the devil as i cocked and squeezed the pistol Cant feel sorrow, im not even human.
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Yo, thanks for listening however far you could make it in the track. Any critics and advice is more then welcome and appreciated both good and bad, this the third song I ever made. I appreciate y'all. #Knowmaddofficial #RapFame #Lyrical #HipHop Welcome to my demo imma rip this instrumental With the pen im presidential and im stacking some credentials My mental is my temple where i harness my potential When I ride the tempo im extra detrimental/ Very disrespectful quit talking out your rectal Send you to the spectral when i cut you like im Tenchu Carve you like a stencil wounds the could never be tend to Your death is essential i watch your spirit leave its vessel/ So i suggest you settle before your laying eternally restful You shouldnt have mettled but nows your time to be resentful And i'll be far from gentle when i feed you all the metal I'll rearrange your dentals you have every reason to tremble/ And youre grave is just a rental so you owe on the rent to Which is actually now due im not sorry to tell you Now off to meet the devil as i cocked and squeezed the pistol Cant feel sorrow, im not even human.
My favourite so far, no brainer... can u off like this in a collab with me?
Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
this track ur best bring heat like this to the crew or hard trap dope bro
@knowmaddofficial come stop by my 4 new songs. leave a like. #WhereIsTheLove2
What's up @knowmaddofficial, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Admission Ticket'! ๐ฅ You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! This beat is working well for you! ๐ผ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! To enhance this track try to make your vocals sound as crisp as possible! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ