jeff 999 on target
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am a war head like gunshot like a lion just like dragon like Jeffrey stop shaking am a lion am a buble like a future from my den past like a potassium from my tasuim (curious) I am lion am in a kingdom 2*
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Hey @jeff999, We're gonna review your track 'jeff 999 on target'. Let's get it! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Our Masterclasses are a great way to improve your rhythm and flow. Try it out! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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