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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @elijahhall.9356! Thanks for sharing 'forgive ' with us! 💥 The beat here is overshadowing the whole track, turn it down a bit so we can hear your vocals! Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Your bars are hard hitting and honest which is great. You have potential, and we can hear that with your flow. You only fall off the beat a few times. With a better recording quality, we know this track can really live up to the potential we know it has! This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Real🦾🐺Lukahill™️

5 years ago

#depletethepublic01 #goattalk010 #last2faced01 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Bo Jangles

5 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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2 months ago

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8 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥