Hey @brelajonez!
Thanks for sharing 'Moonlight Ft. Ofasho' with us! 💥
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The drums are awesome on this one - really gives the track some momentum! 🥁
Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔
The singing is breathtaking - that voice had our jaws on the floor! 🤩
There seems to be a lil difference in quality between the two sections - so to get this banger really sounding pro try and smooth out the mix in the transition! 💯
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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You gave me goosebumps girl ❤️🔥🙏
where the hell is your record deal?? Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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I'm fucking with this
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Y’all are such a vibe 🤩🤩
Hey @brelajonez! Thanks for sharing 'Moonlight Ft. Ofasho' with us! 💥 The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The drums are awesome on this one - really gives the track some momentum! 🥁 Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔ The singing is breathtaking - that voice had our jaws on the floor! 🤩 There seems to be a lil difference in quality between the two sections - so to get this banger really sounding pro try and smooth out the mix in the transition! 💯 Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
i love this type of music can i get a remix Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
This is so beautiful 😩🤒💥💥
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