trapping raping trying to make some happen ant no lacking them pistols u no we packing if yall play heads gone get to cracking if we swing these sticks u'll think it was magic if i wont yo bitch ha back u no im cracking we hit the room she said she ready fa action i said come on lil bitch we can make that happen but if yo nigga get to play my pistol gone start clapping.then im right back on the block like ant nun happened
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Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§
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We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
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trapping raping trying to make some happen ant no lacking them pistols u no we packing if yall play heads gone get to cracking if we swing these sticks u'll think it was magic if i wont yo bitch ha back u no im cracking we hit the room she said she ready fa action i said come on lil bitch we can make that happen but if yo nigga get to play my pistol gone start clapping.then im right back on the block like ant nun happened
What's up @mrdevinowens, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'trapping and raping'! π₯ Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§ You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ This track has a lot of potential. Your bars are fire and you defo got swag in your delivery. You know how to maintain on beat and that shows your talent as a rapper. We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! (also as a side note, please correct the spelling in your title to "rapping") We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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