Hey @brandonflagg,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Bad Business'! ๐ฅ
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
You got talent and thats so clear with this track! Your bars are lit and this beat is fire. We just think that sometimes throughout the track your flow is a bit too fast compared to the beat, try slow it down a notch so you hit the beat perfectly!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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This that fuckin shit bro amazing ๐คฉ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @brandonflagg, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Bad Business'! ๐ฅ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ You got talent and thats so clear with this track! Your bars are lit and this beat is fire. We just think that sometimes throughout the track your flow is a bit too fast compared to the beat, try slow it down a notch so you hit the beat perfectly! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
thank you all for listening and giving for your feedback
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using the n word as a filler to much. other than that good going Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
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